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Kayla paints and draws good but her real talent is creative writing She can make even the most boring situations exciting through her use of words

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There should be a period after writing it should look like this : " writing. She can"
the sentence also says "through her words" when after "words" , there should also be a period.

Other than the missing periods your sentence seems fine.

You could also use a comma after "writing" instead of a period and make the S in  "She" a lower case.

I hope this helps you.